Friday, February 18, 2011

freewrite...

Today it is 48 degrees and beautiful, but I sure didn’t feel beautiful. As I walked to class I had to fight hard to put one foot in front of the other. Head down, last night’s make smeared across my face, I trudged to class. Once in class I tried to busy myself with the mundane assignments, but my mind would eventually drift off. No way had that really happened. What did I do wrong? How can I fix it? I stared out the window hearing his words over and over again, racing through my mind. “I just can’t be in this anymore. I just can’t be with you anymore.” I traced my finger along the scratches in my hard wooden desk, heart in my head.

3 comments:

  1. The scratches on the desk are manifestations of the narrator's scratched psyche, yes? Lots of fun here.

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  2. What surface is the desk? Wood? formica? other?

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